This piece was written for the Six Sentence challenge, with ‘pawn’ as the prompt word.
Bill droned on with a seemingly interminable tale about his grandfather’s prowess at chess and I had reached the point where my eyes had taken on the appearance of glazed doughnuts, so I interrupted with ‘So he was a pawn star.’
Bill exploded with ‘You never listen, really listen, to a damn word I say because you’re too busy working on some sort of pathetic joke or lame pun that you think will make you sound clever and witty and I am absolutely sick of it!’
To annoy him even further, I sat quietly for a while, pretending to be thinking deeply about what he had said, before I quietly offered ‘I’m writing a story about you and I was trying to make you sound more interesting than you actually are and this is the thanks I get, you ungrateful sod.’
Bill’s tone softened considerably as he said ‘Not that you’re famous or widely-read, but what’s the story about and where am I likely to be able to read it when it’s published, just so I can tell my friends and family that the story is based on me?’
‘Well’ I said, with as much as literary ponderousness as I could muster, ‘it will be about a conversation between a boring, pompous old windbag and a writer at the peak of his literary talents who, while pretending to listen to his companion, is quietly composing scathingly witty ripostes, bon mots and puns with which to enrage said companion, who will be known as E. R. Wig.’
Bill’s face had turned puce and his breath had become gale force and I wondered why he was manically opening and closing his fist, and then it hit me.
Clever word play from a writer at the top of his game!
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You are too kind, Hobbo, but I really appreciate it nonetheless.
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Haha, oops, Bill was not flattered and maybe a nose was flattened? At the end of it all, Bill’s contribution made for a good story.
Earwigs… the stuff of childhood nightmares when going to sleep.
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.. and it rarely, if ever, occurs. 🙂
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Ohh, so Bill got right cross? Left one with a toothless riposte?
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🙂
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LOL… very punny, ah… funny!
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Hopefully both. 🙂
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Heeheehee! Well done.
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Thanks, Mimi. btw when I try to follow the links to your stories I get this message ‘Sorry, the page you were looking for in this blog does not exist.’
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The true pun-master is never properly appreciated. Put some ice on that…it’ll help!
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🙂
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You had me at the title, Doug.
With that level of banter, can’t decide if these two are frenemies or best buds 😉
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A bit of both, I think, but sometimes it gets out of hand (or fist). 🙂
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Nice last sentence, especially “and then it hit me”. I also liked “pawn star”.
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Thanks, Frank.
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Clever play on words, double tripple play on words!
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Thanks, Janet
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Enjoyable tale!
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Thanks, Reena.
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Good one Doug 😊
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Thanks, Deb
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You raised a laugh all the way from the belly! Splendid stuff 🙂
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Then my work here is done. 🙂 Thanks, Chris.
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ok First things, fist.*
One of the all too few benefits of hypo-youth is to have Three Stooges cue up at the start of your Six. Something involving a ‘knuckle sandwich’. lol
fun Six
*bar rum bump!
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How politically incorrect you are to admit to knowing and appreciating the Three Stooges. 🙂
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lol
…. “Pick two “
In deference to any Readers you may have who lack the sense of humor (or excessive age*) I will leave the following link incomplete:
youtu.be/5H6m9NZZ5J0
* I know, as if
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Nyuk, nyuk, nyuk. 🙂
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pawnishment…excellent use of the cue!
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Thanks, UP.
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I love the punch line. 😉
What a fun story, and I really like that the pompous pal went puce!
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Glad you enjoyed it. 🙂
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Really, Jenne, punch line!
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🙂
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This raised a snigger or three, Doug.
I guess Bill had to get it off his chess, hmm?
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… or perhaps he was just board or had a cheqeured career? 🙂
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Fun word play!
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Thanks, Lisa
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Poor Bill. He may or may not have had a right to hit you, but it’s his left hook you need to worry about.
Wait… “a writer at the peak of his literary talents”? Nah, you are on the rise, and this here tale within a tale is proof.
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Aw, thanks, D. All the more appreciated coming from you.
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^^?
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Sometimes I think you ask for it; nay, you always ask for it.
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Who? Moi? 🙂
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Peut-être…
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